Aaron O'Leary

🚨 Landing Page Roast: 48 Hours Only 🚨

A few of us at Product Hunt are putting on our most brutally honest (but helpful!) hats and roasting landing pages for the next two days. Want in? Drop your link below, and we’ll give you real, no-BS feedback on:


🔥 Clarity – Does your message make sense or sound like corporate soup?
🔥 Calls to Action – Do we feel compelled to click, or just… leave?
🔥 Design & UX – Smooth experience or rage quit territory?
🔥 Anything else – Tell us what you want feedback on.


No ego, no fluff—just straight-up advice to make your page better. Drop your link below 👇

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Abhishek

this is a your daily dose of trending news and YouTube videos loaded every hour

Michael Wadsworth

Would love to get the teams feedback! adoor.co.uk

Francisco Guzman

My page V30

steve beyatte

@franguzmanx 

  • Looks great

  • Video takes too long to get to the point even though I like you

  • Video feels like it didn't sell the concept well enough. The last thing I want is another way to rewrite/summarize/make longer/whatever with AI. Also the example content in the video didn't feel like good social content, just my two cents

  • Logo carousel of models/services you use always feels weird to me because they aren't your actual users

Francisco Guzman

@steveb, this is one of the best pieces of feedback I have ever received. Thank you, Steve; I will fix these things. 

Chris Streicher

here's mine - https://inlink.com

steve beyatte

@chris_streicher 

  • Hero only: I have no idea what this is

  • Second section: I have no idea what this is

  • Entire page: I have no idea what this is


Literally no idea

Raghu_Rtr

https://20minsrecipes.com/ thank you in advance

steve beyatte

@weblancerdev_ 

  • Cool

  • "Grab the Deal" doesn't make sense to me as a CTA and I click it and i go to a list of recipes. What deal?

  • The "Common Struggles" seems to be selling me on cooking, but I'm sold on cooking. I'm not sold on why I should pay for these recipes when recipes feel pretty commoditized. Are you a chef? Do you have awards?

  • The "$29" plan does not state if that's one time or monthly

Kevin Coyle
steve beyatte

@kevincoyle 

  • Looks good, nice and simple

  • I don't see a callout why a user would use this over other productivity/tracker/todos. If it's the 1-3-5 thing, you kinda have to go all in on that. Maybe I am misinterpreting?

Kevin Coyle

@steveb only just noticed this but since then yeah I’ve gone hard on the 1-3-5 method now with it. There’s the auto planning feature that slots tasks into that plus the feature to automatically break up large tasks into small ones

Saksham Saini

Thank you for doing this!

Dash AI

steve beyatte

@saksham_saini 

  • Landing page looks great

  • Is this free? what's the plan?

  • I hate email and I've used every email automation tool. None of my email problems are around summarization or categorization. I just want the thing to draft emails like me because I answer the same questions 400 times. Everything that says it can draft in my tone doesn't do it. Just my two cents. I would happily pay for something that does this.

Saksham Saini

@steveb Thanks for the feedback!
It is free to use (until I figure out what the plan should be for pro features - you can sign up today)
There is an auto draft feature that lets you draft emails. you can give it a try and lmk.

Anything we can improve to improve signups or discord signups from the landing page?

George Little

I feel like I'm about to learn alot...

Please and Thanks in advance!
VetResumes.com

steve beyatte

@constable_font 

  • I was expecting a resume builder for veterinarians based on the name, was pleasantly surprised

  • Looks super clean and clear and all makes sense, nice work!

  • Good niche, good pitch

George Little
@steveb thank you! I’m glad the process is clear!
Moti Weizman
steve beyatte

@motale 

  • Took me a while to understand this one

  • "Smart Forms For Google Sheets" somehow breaks my brain, why not "Form builder for Google Sheets"

  • It'd be cool to be more explicit on the contracts a company can cancel by using this

  • Cool idea, website and presentation feels cheap but it kind of works too

Moti Weizman

@steveb  Thanks for the feedback! "Smart Forms" is meant to show it’s more than just a form, and we avoided "app" to make it more relatable.

I get your point about "Smart Forms for Google Sheets"—"Form Builder for Google Sheets" is clearer.

Good idea to highlight the contracts companies can cancel. The website is simple, but I’m glad it works!

Bryan Verona

What do you think? https://www.flykatana.com/


steve beyatte

@bryan_verona 

  • Feels cheap

  • Font, spacing, etc. all lead to 'un-polished' vibe

  • 'As featured in forbes' without a link is the new anti-signal

  • I'm slightly interested in 'selling seats' but there's no follow up info

  • I don't know if this is an OTA or an actually novel concept because of the way its presented

Bryan Verona

@steveb thanks for the feedback, will reflect and share with designer. Katana is indeed a novel concept for buying and selling excess seats on private planes.

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