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@taniabell I'm unsure if it's a product or a project management service? Deliberately focusing on how it's a tech-related product and highlighting those features could be helpful!

@taniabell 

• Using Dropbox/Zappos logos feels disingenuous

• I'd be more inclined to trust this page if you showed case studies of real results

@ben_griese thanks for your feedback. what makes you think that this could be a project management service?

btw, it's a product management service.

@steveb thank you for your feedback.

the logos support and illustrate the point I'm making, nothing else.

real results are showcased and testimonials provided

@zorzini 

• Cool, I like this

• Wait, now I'm confused. I thought this was personalized online learning but I clicked "Fundamentals of Machine Learning for Beginners" and I expected to get ask something about how I learn or some way to personalize it

• Product looks cool but I had to click in and sign up to find out I can't personalize courses on a free plan. All I wanted to know was how it does it because the landing page doesn't say anything about it except "Our AI system assesses your learning style, strengths and weaknesses to customize lessons and practice exercises." To me, this is the USP and should be the focus of the landing page.

@eivindhaa 

• This is pretty good.

• How about case studies to prove how you make graphs go up?

• How about showing off content created with podbooster?

@vishakha_gupta4 

• I know what all of the words on the hero mean but I still don't know what you do

• "Managing Multimodal Data For AI Is Hard" - what's hard about it? Who has this problem?

• For all things infra, social proof and answering "are you going to be around tomorrow" becomes really important. Feels pretty sparse

• I am confused generally where this fits into my stack and what i can do with it

@steveb thank you for the feedback which is quite on point. It is something we are actively working on figuring out how to capture.

@techgoddess 

• What does this do that Google Cal doesn't do?

• I want to see the product

• I want to see examples esp. stuff unique to Rosey

@steveb thanks Steve! Appreciate the input, some stuff to think through.

@digimarkethingz 

• "A digital marketing tool to help you send captivating emails." is the only part that made sense to me

• Having a little tool that I can type into to use the tool would be awesome but it's just a gif

• Excited for the launch!

@steveb thank you! 🫶

@colinmathews 

• This is cool and interesting

• I don't like the headline because it only speaks to people who have money issues which are less likely to be the ones who spend money on finance apps, "Is being uncertain about money holding you back?"

• Are you connecting to my banks? or I am just inputting data?

• The samples page doesn't have anything that would interest me and I'm interested in pretty much anything in this sphere. All buy vs rent calculators, retirement calculators, etc. are wrong. This could do it so much better.

@steveb Thank you - this is great feedback! No, it's not connecting to any banks; just taking inputs.

That's really helpful on the samples not being interesting. Maybe they don't come across as personal, or don't convey a sense of urgency. The goal was to inspire the visitor into thinking of how they'd use it, but I wonder if they would be more useful in an education context, instead of as marketing.

If you think of something you'd have liked to see that could have led you to an a-ha moment, please let me know! Thanks again -- 🙏🏻

@neda_ghazi 

• Wow is this the bounty hunter version of Intro.co? That's kind of neat

• It feels very impersonal at the moment not to tout your experts. That's the thing that would make me trust/use it

• So many unanswered questions- what's the hit rate? How are you ensuring a request turns into a meeting? How are you setting the price? Does this work?

• FWIW, I like "Your wish, any expert, We make it happen" more than "Meet Expert Minds"

@richard_ouellet1 

• There's so much fluff here. I didn't read your comment here, went to the website and I am 30 seconds into the video and it's still all nebulous fluff.

• Even after reading the lower part of the website, I still have no idea

• Try rewriting copy the same way you'd tell a friend what you're doing. If I asked someone what they do and they said they "Supercharge Your Growth Turn Visitors into Your Biggest Promoters" I would not get it

@steveb 

Thanks!

You just confirmed what I thought, I am getting decent traffic but the conversion rate is abnormally low.

@harriet_morton_liddle 

• This is interesting

• £25/year feels like it may be too cheap?

• It seems like the crux is that you give people data and templates on how to negotiate better leave in the UK, is that right?

• There's a lot of design areas that feel really cramped an then a lot that have a ton of whitespace

• Overall this feels pretty good!

• Weird image overlay bug:

  
  

@steveb Thanks appreciate it!

Yeah we have a database of parental leave policies to help people negotiate but we also have our membership which a community as well as access to masterclasses where we deep dive on topics specific to maternity pay in the uk.

Pricing is something we are working on the moment. Due to the topic we are discussing (maternity pay/parental pay) the price is a sticky point as people dont want to pay/grumble when they have to pay.

Appreciate the feedback and thanks for highlighting the overlay bug!