Aaron O'Leary

🚨 Landing Page Roast: 48 Hours Only 🚨

A few of us at Product Hunt are putting on our most brutally honest (but helpful!) hats and roasting landing pages for the next two days. Want in? Drop your link below, and we’ll give you real, no-BS feedback on:


🔥 Clarity – Does your message make sense or sound like corporate soup?
🔥 Calls to Action – Do we feel compelled to click, or just… leave?
🔥 Design & UX – Smooth experience or rage quit territory?
🔥 Anything else – Tell us what you want feedback on.


No ego, no fluff—just straight-up advice to make your page better. Drop your link below 👇

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Riley Crane

Dang, this is a cool idea. I just launched my landing page a few weeks back and would love some tough love!


Here's the link: www.pardonmyfr.com

steve beyatte

@cranecriley 

  • Do we really need cookie consents? (rhetorical)

  • Domain is 🔥, 10/10

  • Super simple and clean

  • Call to action of newsletter is clear but 'book a lesson' has no supporting info. Who are you? How French are you? Why should I French with you? How much is the French? More info!

Riley Crane

Thanks, @steveb! It's good to learn the Book a Lesson CTA feels unsupported. I'll think on that and see how I can make things clearer! I'm building a second page with answers to those questions, but I can definitely work some of it onto the landing.

Greg

@cranecriley I'm french and this domain made me laugh :D

Joaquín Galé
Ben Griese

@joaquin_gale1 is this a product or a service? it comes off as a group of people providing data insights. how does it tie into or relate to tech?

steve beyatte

@joaquin_gale1 

  • I'm confused

  • If we're automating growth, why are you helping me with my chatbot?

  • No case studies or info about who is involved seems odd

  • Why is mix modeling good? What does it tell me that Shopify can't?

  • Are you targeting e-com? If so, maybe say that?

Sameed

Awesome! Here you go: reap

steve beyatte

@abdulsameed 

  • Great home page. I signed up with no scroll. (Is a no-scroll signup a thing? it should be)

  • It didn't remember the YT link I pasted :-(

  • Are all these big creators actually using it? if so, you should highlight it even more than just the video grid

  • Offtopic: i want an API for something like this

  • This looks great

Brad Bertsche
steve beyatte

@rageix 

  • Nice work, it's clean and simple

  • I want some magic to make sure what goes on it is actually good. I can write things on a page but I want guidance on how to make it good, not just take my words and make presentation nice

Brad Bertsche

@steveb Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it!

Samuel Roy
steve beyatte

@0xgrrr 

  • This is interesting

  • The video is really well done except I don't feel like you gave me a reason to use it. The video user asked a verbal question of a YT video but it wasn't clear it was responding based on the transcript. I'd like to see a killer use case. The video tagged in a bunch of apps like Notion but then didn't do anything with them.

  • Second video is good! Helped a lot re: the above

  • 3rd video I am confused again about how the context menu works and how to use it

  • Oh wow it does meeting recording, too

  • This is rad!

  • You should launch on Product Hunt and use your forums for your community

  • This is v cool

steve beyatte

@0xgrrr 

I actually don't like "Intelligence for your entire workday" as it's not solely for work and that feels too fluffy. "The first AI assistant living in your macOS notch that works with all your apps." is great though.

Samuel Roy

@steveb Doing a Product Hunt launch is what we're planning and we want to do it right! We built an active community on Discord in the past 2 months, I'll check how we can leverage the Forum as a more public place to gather people ideas and feedback around us!

Thanks for taking the time to watch the videos, we'll rework that and the landing to better communicate our value proposition before our PH launch.

Dan Rutledge

Thanks for the offer! meetify.com

steve beyatte

@dan_rutledge 

  • I definitely get it, video is very clear

  • I do not have this problem, but I do not leave my house, lol

  • Good landing page

Dan Rutledge

@steveb Thanks, Steve. Glad it was all clear. And appreciate your time looking it over!

Shekhar K. Sharma
Help me with 👉: https://pluswhois.com , please!
steve beyatte

@nxame 

  • My interest was piqued but I ran a search on a domain and it's the same as every other whois

  • What's the play here? builtwith competitor?

  • Feels like too early for a roast because it doesn't do the thing

Shekhar K. Sharma

@steveb Building it solo! Did some more udpate today.


Play: FInd out most of the things related to whois from one place. Don't have to switch sites to find basic info.


Next: if you dont own the domain, and would like to monitor aka get notified on renewal, expiry or if that domain becomes free - my app has the feature to monitor it.

Chris Piccaro

Put the spurs to her: BottleTrail

steve beyatte

@chris_piccaro 

  • Love it, I've talked to all of your competitors

  • How do you know the prompts you track are actually what people ask

  • Do you actually see people making sales and generating real traffic from chatbot referrals yet

  • Good landing page

Chris Piccaro

@steveb  Thank you, greatly appreciated! Great questions.

  • How do you know the prompts you track are actually what people ask

    Honestly, I don't...yet. I leave it up to the marketers who use BottleTrail to input their own keywords, target audience, etc. and then generate prompts based on their input.

  • Do you actually see people making sales and generating real traffic from chatbot referrals yet

    Yes, but it's difficult to track the details like we can with SEO.

Matty Reed
steve beyatte

@matty_reed 

  • It's so much easier to be unaccountable without this existing, ugh

  • Landing page is great, super clear what it does

  • No notes, well done

Adrian Axenie
Praveen chary

@adrian_axenie show the demo with a sample.

  • add some use cases around the features.

steve beyatte

@adrian_axenie 

  • Good clean landing page

  • Show examples of what problems I can solve with this, why do people upload PDFs?

  • Very good, product seems to work well