@tahorg To start with, "Review & Updates Monitor for App Store & Google Play" is difficult to digest as a sentence. And that's supposed to be your hook.
Maybe something like "Monitor your App's Reviews and Downloads. For Apple's App Store and Google's Play Store." Might be wordy but it's way more clear about what it's going to do. Second sentence is even optional as we'd imagine it works for both platforms. Can be removed or downplayed to something like "Works with" and then list the platform logos you guys support.
And then the biggest problem I had was with that first screenshot you show of your dashboard. I'm pretty in-tune with this space but I couldn't figure out what it was trying to show me. If it takes me more than 10 seconds to determine the value, I'm out. And I think others would be also.
Again, great idea. I want it. Just constructive criticism so you can get your idea across better.
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