Feedback wanted! Which Hero title and tagline resonates the most with you?
Hey PH community, looking for feedback.
Hello Inbox is an email deliverability platform helping businesses reach the inbox (think GlockApps).
As a potential customer of even as a SaaS business owner, which title and tagline resonates the most with you?
1. Current (see screenshot)
Send Emails People Actually See.
Find out why your emails land in spam — and fix in minutes — with AI-powered tools backed by a real deliverability expert.
2.
Your Emails Deserve to Be Read.
Test your deliverability, find what's broken, and fix it — with AI tools built by a Top-Rated expert.
3.
Stop Sending Emails Into the Void.
See exactly where your emails land — inbox, spam, or promotions — and get AI-powered fixes in minutes.
4.
Every Email You Send Should Land.
Most don't. Find out why yours aren't reaching the inbox — and fix it before your next campaign.
5.
Send With Confidence. Land in the Inbox.
Test, fix, and monitor your email deliverability with 9 tools and an AI trained by a real expert.
6.
More Inbox. Less Spam. Zero Guesswork.
Run a deliverability test in 2 minutes. Get AI-powered fixes backed by a Top-Rated deliverability expert.
7.
Are Your Emails Even Getting There?
Find out in 2 minutes. Test your deliverability, fix what's broken, and start reaching more inboxes today.
8.
You Write Great Emails. We Make Sure They Arrive.
AI-powered deliverability tools that test, monitor, and fix your emails — built by a real expert.
9.
Built to Get You Into the Inbox.
9 deliverability tools, one AI expert, and everything you need to stop landing in spam.
10.
What If Every Email You Sent Got Opened?
Test your deliverability. Fix what's broken. Monitor everything — with AI tools backed by a real expert.
Replies
I can give you some quick tips as a copywriter to narrow down your choice (which seems to be too much!):
title should be short and just one sentence (5-6 words is perfect)
always prefer the active instead of the passive form ("send emails people actually see" works better than "your emails deserve to be read")
always prefer positive rather than negative assumptions ("send with confidence" better than "stop sending emails into the void")
as for the tagline in particular, I'd avoid using the em dash 'cause it looks like AI-written and I would also avoid making lists of three (e.g. "tools that test, monitor, and fix your emails" or "Test, fix, and monitor") which also sounds AI-written. This is not to say that I'm against using AI for writing, it's just that these sentence structures are obviously less unique and easier to find on different websites. So, if you want to differentiate better, I'd suggest you avoid using them.
Hope these tips help :)
Hello Inbox
@pamela_arienti Active and positive makes sense. Good tips, thanks Pamela.
Hello Inbox
@pamela_arienti What do you think of this? Should I remove "monitor"?
@ismaelyws I think that removing "monitor" would improve the flow of the sentence (which would not be interrupted by the two commas anymore) and still clearly explain what your tools do, putting the emphasis on the "test" and "fix" more important aspects.
So, yes, I would go with removing it :)
Glad to be of help!
Hello Inbox
@pamela_arienti done, TY!
I am into 1 and 8. They feel closer to the solution.
Hello Inbox
@norteapp Noted, thanks Jose!
Hi Ismaelyws
Nice to meet you
I like slogan number 5. Just as the saying goes that participation is important, it will be important to send the email with confidence.
I am a senior full stack ai and mobile app developer.
Are these slogans to be reflected on your website?
Hello Inbox
@fawe noted, thank you.