Roast my Product
Hello friends, I am the founder of a One Pager, and I want you to share your honest thoughts.
One Pager is a fast, flexible builder for creating high-converting landing pages tailored to your customer types. The personalization helps with conversion for sales and generally helps out for step of the customer journey.
Help me understand if you find a tool like this to be valuable, as in my experience it does and especially in today's AI climate the extra human touch goes a long way, which is why I've made the platform video centric.
Tell me what you think is:
What’s confusing?
What feels unnecessary?
What would stop you from using this?
Sign up, play around, break things and as an example of the type of pages that can be created, here is my message to you --> https://app.one-pager.io/p/UmAqpx
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Hi Jake, I like the idea, especially the focus on peronalization. One thing I struggled a bit to understand is what makes this meaningfully different from other landing page builders right away.
Terms like 'customer types' and 'personalization' sounds strong but I'm not immediately sure what that looks like in practice or what I'm getting as a user.
For me it clicked more when I thought of it as;
-- One landing page adapting to different visitors automatically.
I feel like making that more obvious upfront could help it land more faster.
@olive_mwangi Thank you so much for taking a look at One Pager, this is great feedback and a question I get often, I've really tried to optimize One Pager to be the easiest landing page builder out there and so that sharing the pages is very easy as well.
I see your speciality is copywriting, I'd love to connect more over a meeting and get some more of your thoughts if you're open to it!
@jake_friedberg Hey, I like what you're building, and I think there's a lot of potential in how it's positioned.
A quick chat sounds great. Feel free to share a time that works for you, or I can send a couple of slots as well. Looking forward to it.
@olive_mwangi you may feel free to provide some times and an email to send an invite to here or if it’s more comfortable for you we can discuss over LinkedIn!
https://www.linkedin.com/me?trk=p_mwlite_feed-secondary_nav
@jake_friedberg I'm available on Thursday 30th from afternoon. Let me know what time works best for you. You can send the invite to olive.ehm@gmail.com and we can do it over zoom or Google meet.
Looking forward to it.